Wednesday, February 20, 2008

disarray

My thoughts are in disarray

Emptiness I feel inside

Feeling so incomplete

Can’t you be by my side

Don’t you know how I feel

Are you going to walk away

Or be part of my life

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

really nice =)

Anonymous said...

So sad...hmm I wonder, is this all about the same person you have been writing about?

just tell her how you feel.

Anonymous said...

this makes u sound very selfish..."I" feel..."my" side.."my" life.... wat abt the other person u are not even considering them for a second but then again who isnt selfish...

i like the poem...its good!!**

Sharjeel said...
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